Friday, 31 May 2013

Creative Writing #3

  
     On May 20, 2013, it was two little boys birthday named, Brendan and Ivan. They are going to have a party in the afternoon that day. Jamie's parents had to go and get ready and buy two cakes, while Jamie's parent were doing so much stuff they decided to drop off Jamie, her brother, her cousins and her aunt to the mall. When driving to the mall, Jamie's cousins, Amy and Alan were fighting. At first Amy and Alan were sitting in the van quietly.

     But then Amy asked Alan "Why do you open put your leg so far apart from each other? There is no more room. Alan answered "I like to, do you have a problem with that? Then Amy said "yea", Alan quickly said that it is her problem. Amy then got angry and starting hitting Alan. They started screaming at each other and copying what each other said before. While Amy and Alan are still fighting, Jamie started to scream too. Jamie started screaming because Amy and Alan was about to start saying bad words and their mother was sitting right in the middle row. Sitting beside Amy's mom is Jamie's brother, Jason. Jason didn't want to get involved with this screaming so he was quietly during the whole drive. Amy's mom did not stop them. The only reason why Jamie got involved was because when Amy and Alan were screaming at each other they were also pushing each other which cause them to push Jamie as well. The screaming goes on for 10 minutes. By the time they were done yelling at each other they have arrived to the mall.

1 comment:

  1. This post made me laugh, it reminds me a lot of how brothers and sisters fight when they are little.

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