Stephanie! My friend Maddie called out, she was looking for me to ask if I wanted to go to the mall with her after school is over. Since it's my birthday tomorrow, I'll go and get a present for myself. I am almost 17 years old on June 22. After school I went to the mall with my best friend Maddie, When I went into this store I saw these beautiful heels but since I am 5'7" Maddie and I think that I am kind of too tall wear heels. Going around the mall I end up finding this gorgeous light blue headband that matches my dark brown hair and my light-medium skin tone. That is everything that I got at the mall, when we were all done getting what we needed, we take the bus home. When I got home I finished my homework, ate dinner and showered, I quickly went to bed because I can't wait till tomorrow.
The next day... I woke up brushed my teeth, got dressed up in my casual clothes since it's feeling cool for this season in Brisbane, Australia and did what I needed to do in the morning, I went downstairs and I see birthday presents from my family. My father gave me $50, my mother bought me more clothes for the winter that is coming up and my brother, Stephen made me a really cute card and a chocolate bar which is my favourite. Then I ate my breakfast and went to school. That day of school I didn't have much homework, but that was a going thing because I had I to go to work today to save up for collage in a year. Overall that day was a good birthday; I went home after working and drew an outline of my day since I love drawing. As I was drawing, I was thinking what will tomorrow be like.
I like how your writing was simple, but you still managed to put lots of little details into it, like her physical descriptions, her family, her friends, and interests, like shopping
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